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ROX-20769: Add changelog entry about major version upgrade #93434
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TY for submitting the RN! I have made some suggestions based on our style guides (IBM Style and Red Hat SSG).
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To make the database upgrade process smooth, we recommend: |
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To make the database upgrade process smooth, we recommend: | |
To ensure that the database upgrade is successful, follow these suggestions: |
There is specific style guide guidance about not using "recommend" or we recommend, so I've suggested a change here.
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This one is tricky, because "do this to make the upgrade successful" is a too strong statement. The point is that the migration will be successful for almost everyone, we've put lots of efforts into this. Those recommendations are more about avoiding corner cases, where things are getting complicated.
That being said, how about this?
When preparing the upgrade to RHACS 4.8, follow these suggestions:
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existing cluster to {product-title-short} 4.8, Central DB will do an in-place | ||
upgrade of the data collected so far. | ||
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I would not have these bullets as a note (multiple lines in notes does not look the best) and have it be a sentence with bullets instead. Maybe move the part about not upgrading the database to here, right before you say "To ensure..." and make that an "important" note:
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Not quite follow what do you mean by "move the part about not upgrading the database to here"? Which part are you referring to?
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* Do not interrupt the upgrade procedure. If that happens, a manual |
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I would remove this as a bullet and put it as an "important" note at the beginning of the paragraph as in previous comment.
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replied below, you can ignore this :)
Co-authored-by: Kerry Carmichael <[email protected]>
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I was going to suggest only making the part about backing up be formatted with "important," and have the rest just be normal formatting, but this is fine the way it is, never mind. :)
When preparing the upgrade to {product-title-short} 4.8, follow these | ||
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* Back up the database before upgrading to {product-title-short} 4.8 |
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* Back up the database before upgrading to {product-title-short} 4.8 | |
* Back up the database before upgrading to {product-title-short} 4.8. |
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Version(s): 4.8
Issue: ROX-20769
Link to docs preview:
https://93434--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-acs/latest/release_notes/48-release-notes.html
QE review:
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