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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Oct 29, 2024

  • replace conjunctions with words
  • replace passive voice with active voice
  • some sentence simplification
  • replace keyboard shortcuts entered as commands with the markdown equivalents
  • correct spelling of "tiling"

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  • Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

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* replace conjunctions with words
* replace passive voice with active voice
* some sentence simplification
* replace keyboard shortcuts entered as commands with the markdown equivalents
* correct spelling of "tiling"
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Test results for b66abc7:

Number of broken URLs: 6

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 http://0.0.0.0:61208/,failed,guides/network/glances_network_monitoring.md
 https://www.qyecst.cn,failed,guides/contribute/README.md
 https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/resf.rockylinux-aarch64,failed,guides/cloud/migration-to-new-azure-images.md

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@webgtx Thanks so much for another great contribution! If you will be writing more documents (I hope this is the case!), you might want to consider reading our formatting document, particularly this section relating to markdown keyboard shortcuts. I can always add those in while editing though. That document is something we update as things change, and is a good resource for new Rocky Linux document writers to review. Thanks again!

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit a493a44 into rocky-linux:main Oct 29, 2024
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@sspencerwire sspencerwire deleted the kitty_editing branch November 11, 2024 14:47
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