Normative change to SC 2.2.2 - replace "information" with "content", rewrite note 3

guidelines/sc/20/pause-stop-hide.html

@@ -1,57 +1,39 @@
 <section id="pause-stop-hide" class="sc">
-
    <h4>Pause, Stop, Hide</h4>
-   
+
    <p class="conformance-level">A</p>
-
-   <p>For moving, <a>blinking</a>, scrolling, or auto-updating information, all of the following are true:
-   </p>
-
+
+   <p>For moving, <a>blinking</a>, scrolling, or auto-updating content, all of the following are true:</p>
+
    <dl>
-
       <dt>Moving, blinking, scrolling</dt>
-
       <dd>
-
-         <p>For any moving, blinking or scrolling information that (1) starts automatically, (2)
+         <p>For any moving, blinking or scrolling content that (1) starts automatically, (2)
             lasts more than five seconds, and (3) is presented in parallel with other content,
-           there is a <a>mechanism</a> for the user to <a>pause</a>, stop, or hide it unless the movement, blinking, or scrolling is part of an activity
-            where it is <a>essential</a>; and
-         </p>
-
+            there is a <a>mechanism</a> for the user to <a>pause</a>, stop, or hide it unless the movement, blinking, or scrolling is part of an activity
+            where it is <a>essential</a>; and</p>
       </dd>
-
       <dt>Auto-updating</dt>
-
       <dd>
-
-         <p>For any auto-updating information that (1) starts automatically and (2) is presented
+         <p>For any auto-updating content that (1) starts automatically and (2) is presented
             in parallel with other content, there is a mechanism for the user to pause, stop,
             or hide it or to control the frequency of the update unless the auto-updating is part
-            of an activity where it is essential.
-         </p>
-
+            of an activity where it is essential.</p>
       </dd>
-
    </dl>
-
-   <p class="note">For requirements related to flickering or flashing content, refer to <a href="#seizures-and-physical-reactions">Guideline 2.3</a>.
-   </p>
+
+   <p class="note">For requirements related to flickering or flashing content, refer to <a href="#seizures-and-physical-reactions">Guideline 2.3</a>.</p>
 
    <p class="note">Since any content that does not meet this success criterion can interfere with a user's
       ability to use the whole page, all content on the web page (whether it is used to
-      meet other success criteria or not) must meet this success criterion. See <a href="#cc5">Conformance Requirement 5: Non-Interference</a>.
-   </p>
+      meet other success criteria or not) must meet this success criterion. See <a href="#cc5">Conformance Requirement 5: Non-Interference</a>.</p>
 
-   <p class="note">Content that is updated periodically by software or that is streamed to the user agent
-      is not required to preserve or present information that is generated or received between
-      the initiation of the pause and resuming presentation, as this may not be technically
-      possible, and in many situations could be misleading to do so.
-   </p>
+   <p class="note">When auto-updating content was paused, it is not required
+      for any of the updates that happened while the content was paused to be presented
+      to the user once the content is un-paused again – as this may not be technically
+      possible, and in many situations could be confusing or misleading.</p>
 
    <p class="note">An animation that occurs as part of a preload phase or similar situation can be considered
       essential if interaction cannot occur during that phase for all users and if not indicating
-      progress could confuse users or cause them to think that content was frozen or broken.
-   </p>
-
+      progress could confuse users or cause them to think that content was frozen or broken.</p>
 </section>