Update quick-start-guide.md #5811
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I fixed documentation issues in a WSO2 product and submitted a merged PR.
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WalkthroughA single documentation file was updated with improved wording, expanded descriptions for clarity, standardized punctuation conventions, and more formal terminology across product descriptions, user role sections, and privacy-related content. Changes
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🧹 Nitpick comments (1)
en/identity-server/7.2.0/docs/get-started/quick-start-guide.md (1)
5-5: Replace vague phrase "and much more" with concrete features or remove for succinctness.The phrase "and much more" is somewhat vague and could be strengthened by either listing specific additional capabilities or removing it entirely to maintain the focused, direct tone recommended for documentation.
As per coding guidelines, avoid weasel words in documentation.
🔎 Proposed fix
- **{{ product_name }} (WSO2 IS)** simplifies the Customer Identity and Access Management (CIAM) needs of your organization. It ensures seamless integration with a wide range of applications to enable single sign-on (SSO), social login, identity federation, API security, strong authentication, account management, privacy compliance, and much more. + **{{ product_name }} (WSO2 IS)** simplifies the Customer Identity and Access Management (CIAM) needs of your organization. It ensures seamless integration with a wide range of applications to enable single sign-on (SSO), social login, identity federation, API security, strong authentication, account management, and privacy compliance.
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Learnt from: Thisara-Welmilla
Repo: wso2/docs-is PR: 5732
File: en/includes/guides/service-extensions/pre-flow-extensions/action-versions/pre-update-profile-action-v1.x.md:273-273
Timestamp: 2025-12-01T15:31:14.922Z
Learning: In the wso2/docs-is repository documentation files, prefer unhyphenated compound adjectives (e.g., "SCIM API compliant", "Admin initiated profile update") over hyphenated versions for better readability and natural flow.
Learnt from: CR
Repo: wso2/docs-is PR: 0
File: .github/copilot-instructions.md:0-0
Timestamp: 2025-11-25T04:16:59.212Z
Learning: Avoid weasel words in documentation
Learnt from: CR
Repo: wso2/docs-is PR: 0
File: .github/copilot-instructions.md:0-0
Timestamp: 2025-11-25T04:16:59.212Z
Learning: Keep documentation content succinct—nothing more, nothing less
Learnt from: CR
Repo: wso2/docs-is PR: 0
File: .github/copilot-instructions.md:0-0
Timestamp: 2025-11-25T04:16:59.212Z
Learning: Write documentation for multiple audiences: Developers (integrating the product), Testers/QA (verifying workflows), Support Engineers/Admins (troubleshooting), and Newcomers (onboarding)
Learnt from: CR
Repo: wso2/docs-is PR: 0
File: .github/copilot-instructions.md:0-0
Timestamp: 2025-11-25T04:16:59.212Z
Learning: Bold key terms and phrases in documentation
🔇 Additional comments (2)
en/identity-server/7.2.0/docs/get-started/quick-start-guide.md (2)
8-16: Iframe styling and accessibility improvements look good.The responsive container implementation (padding-top: 56.25%), explicit title attribute, and allow permissions are well-structured for cross-device compatibility and accessibility.
21-27: User role descriptions are clear and well-defined.The terminology updates (e.g., "comprehensive IAM solutions") are more precise, and the expanded DPO description appropriately contextualizes privacy compliance responsibilities.
| - **Secure ever-growing APIs** – {{ product_name }} acts as an authorization server that supports multiple OAuth-related standards and profiles. It supports open standards such as OAuth 2.0, OpenID Connect, and SAML 2.0, while enabling high availability, failover, and optimal performance. | ||
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| - **To safeguard user data and give them control over it** - {{ product_name }} enables recording, reviewing, and revoking user consents by adhering to privacy by design principles and industry standards imposed by GDPR and similar privacy laws such as CCPA and LGDP. | ||
| - **Safeguard user data and give users control** – {{ product_name }} enables the recording, review, and revocation of user consent by adhering to privacy-by-design principles and regulatory standards such as GDPR, CCPA, and LGDP. |
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Correct regulatory acronym "LGDP" to "LGPD".
Line 47 references "LGDP," but the Brazilian data protection law is "LGPD" (Lei Geral de Proteção de Dados). This typo could mislead users and impact compliance documentation accuracy.
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- - **Safeguard user data and give users control** – {{ product_name }} enables the recording, review, and revocation of user consent by adhering to privacy-by-design principles and regulatory standards such as GDPR, CCPA, and LGDP.
+ - **Safeguard user data and give users control** – {{ product_name }} enables the recording, review, and revocation of user consent by adhering to privacy-by-design principles and regulatory standards such as GDPR, CCPA, and LGPD.📝 Committable suggestion
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| - **Safeguard user data and give users control** – {{ product_name }} enables the recording, review, and revocation of user consent by adhering to privacy-by-design principles and regulatory standards such as GDPR, CCPA, and LGDP. | |
| - **Safeguard user data and give users control** – {{ product_name }} enables the recording, review, and revocation of user consent by adhering to privacy-by-design principles and regulatory standards such as GDPR, CCPA, and LGPD. |
🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
en/identity-server/7.2.0/docs/get-started/quick-start-guide.md around line 47:
the regulatory acronym is mistyped as "LGDP"; update the text to "LGPD" (Lei
Geral de Proteção de Dados) so the sentence reads "...regulatory standards such
as GDPR, CCPA, and LGPD." and ensure no other occurrences of "LGDP" remain in
the file.
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I fixed documentation issues in the WSO2 Identity Server quick start guide by improving wording, consistency, formatting, and readability. No functional or behavioral changes were made.
This PR focuses only on documentation improvements.
Purpose
Improve clarity, grammar, consistency, and formatting of the quick-start-guide.md to enhance readability and user understanding.
This PR does not introduce any functional or code changes.
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