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WalkthroughDocumentation content in the hero/description section was rephrased for conciseness and readability. The first paragraph was split into a shorter opening sentence and now includes a "digital-transformation" term. No functional or logic changes. Changes
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en/docs/index.md (1)
63-63: Great improvement to readability—consider removing redundant phrasing.The rewrite successfully splits the introductory sentence into shorter, clearer statements, which improves flow and readability. The hyphenation of "digital-transformation" is also appropriate for the compound adjective usage.
However, the phrase "streamlines connectivity among applications, services, data, and the cloud" appears in both the second and third sentences, creating unnecessary repetition. Consider consolidating or rephrasing the third sentence to avoid this redundancy and maintain the clarity gain.
Suggested refinement:
-WSO2 Integrator: MI is a comprehensive integration solution. It simplifies your digital-transformation journey by streamlining connectivity among applications, services, data, and the cloud. The WSO2 Integrator: MI streamlines connectivity among applications, services, data, and the cloud using a user-friendly, low-code graphical design experience. Deployment options include both microservices and ESB styles for greater flexibility. +WSO2 Integrator: MI is a comprehensive integration solution. It simplifies your digital-transformation journey by streamlining connectivity among applications, services, data, and the cloud. With a user-friendly, low-code graphical design experience, it supports both microservices and ESB styles for greater flexibility.
Purpose
This PR fixes an issue where the initial description in the documentation included unclear phrasing. The sentence “simplifies your digital transformation journey” has now been split into two clearer statements to improve readability and flow.
Goals
The goal of this update is to improve clarity and make the documentation easier for users to understand by restructuring the sentence.
Approach
I updated the text in the relevant documentation file by rewriting the sentence into two separate lines. No UI changes were made.
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User stories
N/A — This change only updates documentation and does not affect user-facing functionality.
Release note
Improved clarity in documentation by restructuring unclear phrasing in the introductory sentence.
Documentation
Documentation updated in the same PR. No additional doc impact.
Training
N/A — This change does not affect training materials.
Certification
N/A — Documentation wording change does not impact certification content.
Marketing
N/A — Not a feature addition or product improvement requiring marketing content.
Automation tests
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Samples
N/A — No samples were updated.
Related Public Relations
None.
Migrations (if applicable)
N/A: There is no effect of migration.
Test environment
Documentation-only change; no environment testing required.
Learning
Reviewed existing documentation patterns to ensure consistency with WSO2 writing standards.
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