adding new Upgrade section to docs site#5085
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I really like the location in the top bar, it makes it so clear on where to go and where to put additional items related to upgrading. |
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@janan07 -- left review comments but didn't always make comments every time I thought they were applicable b/c that would've felt too repetitive for both of us. Consolidating my thoughts here: Overall, it seems to me like this is focused on server-side upgrades. I don't think that's always clear in all of the articles here. For example, when we have an article titled Upgrading Zowe, what part of Zowe are we talking about? I don't think I saw much client-side content in there, so I think we should clarify this, or expand the scope a little in this article. Should we be adding instructions on how to upgrade all components to this new Upgrade section? For example, Updating Zowe CLI and Zowe CLI plug-ins is currently in the Install section of the site. Should it stay there or be relocated? I will be asking this to the Onboarding squad tomorrow. Comments on style points I saw across this PR:
I won't approve this PR until I get a better sense from the Onboarding discussion on what we're doing about client-vs-server side updgrade documentation. Lmk if you have questions. Thanks for all hard work here. Lots of good stuff. |
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| # Backout to revert to a previous Zowe version | |||
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Do we need the word "backout" here? I ask b/c I'm not sure if this could be a technical term I'm not aware of. If possible, would it be better to title this "Revert to a previous Zowe version"? Or "Downgrade to a previous Zowe version"?
We use "downgrade" elsewhere in the doc and it'd be nice to have the wording align:
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| * If you need to revert an upgrade later, follow the recovery procedure in [Backout to revert to older Zowe version](./backout-zos.md). | ||
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| ## Installation and Configuration Tasks |
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Pls change to sentence-style capitalization, per the zowe style guide
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| To complete an upgrade, perform all tasks listed in the **Installing** section of the installation guide. However, you only need to complete selected tasks within the **Configuration** sections. | ||
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| Unless otherwise noted by an announcement or SMP/E HOLD statement, you do not need to update certificates, instance datasets, networking, or security rules during an upgrade. Using [Configuring Zowe via JCL](../user-guide/configuring-zowe-via-jcl.md) as an example, you can skip the following steps: |
| To complete an upgrade, perform all tasks listed in the **Installing** section of the installation guide. However, you only need to complete selected tasks within the **Configuration** sections. | ||
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| Unless otherwise noted by an announcement or SMP/E HOLD statement, you do not need to update certificates, instance datasets, networking, or security rules during an upgrade. Using [Configuring Zowe via JCL](../user-guide/configuring-zowe-via-jcl.md) as an example, you can skip the following steps: | ||
| * Create Instance Data sets |
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Why capitalize anything after "Create"?
| Unless otherwise noted by an announcement or SMP/E HOLD statement, you do not need to update certificates, instance datasets, networking, or security rules during an upgrade. Using [Configuring Zowe via JCL](../user-guide/configuring-zowe-via-jcl.md) as an example, you can skip the following steps: | ||
| * Create Instance Data sets | ||
| * Grant SAF permissions | ||
| * Keyring Tasks |
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Should "tasks" be capitalized?
| Before transitioning to the single-service model, verify that your z/OS environment meets the minimum standards for Zowe v3: | ||
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| * **Java** | ||
| Must be upgraded to Java 17 or Java 21. Ensure the `java.home` parameter in your zowe.yaml points to the correct home location for one of these versions. |
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backticks for zowe.yaml in both bullets?
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| Set `components.gateway.apiml.security.auth.provider: saf`. | ||
| The certificate that is used for signing is found in `zowe.certificate.keystore.file`. | ||
| This configuration enables API ML to validate identities using SAF Direct APIs. |
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Should Lines 38, 39, 40 be sub-bullets? Or numbered steps? Not sure what these lines mean, are they instructions? Some formatting might help clear things up.
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| ## Restarting Zowe | ||
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| After completing the infrastructure refresh and mandatory cleanup, you can bring Zowe back online. |
| Follow these steps to validate that you successfully migrated your Zowe installation. | ||
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| 1. Start the following Zowe Started Tasks (STCs): | ||
| * **ZWESISTC** |
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Can we add more indentation to the sub-bullets in Step1 and Step 3 to help them easier to read/understand their structure w/in the steps of instructions?
| * Retain previous runtime datasets | ||
| Use the following guidelines to maintain rollback readiness in the event of unexpected issues during your Zowe migration: | ||
| * Retain previous runtime data sets | ||
| * Keep backup copies of all JCLs and configuration members |

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